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Crazy Plot twist (TG, Corruption,AR)

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Just a crazy idea before I return to Grey Justice it resulted from a conversation with a friend about plot twists in series. Sometimes I swear they make them way too hard to predict by making them a little random or seem impossible.

So I thought if they do a plot twist you can't predict why not make a likeable one? Well of course whether its likeable or not depends on your tastes but the story behind the pic is as follows... (You would be amazed what a bored mind come up with at work.)

Asuka our heroine for this series is an heir to a well established ninja clan in an alternate world to our own where instead of having guns they have ninjustsu and magic. However because of the clan being old fashioned and traditional she has an arranged marriage to keep relations between another ninja clan peachy so they don't fall out. However the ruler of a nearby country suddenly attacks the country where Asuka lives and in the attack her betrothed and her older brothers die meaning she is now the sole successor. The reason why she is the ruling family of her clan is due to the demonic possession justsu which is a blood pact that results in a greater demon possessing the body of the justsu user temporarily for unsurpassed battle abilities shown by the seals wrapped around her arms.

As she approaches the climatic battle and moves in for the kill she touches the pendant around her neck which is the matching pendant that was given to her by her childhood friend from the other clan. Asuka is shocked to see the old king smilling at her as despite her quick dexterous movements she was spotted but the greatest shock is when the king pulls open his shirt to reveal a matching pendant to her own hung around his neck. As the same kind of seals wrapped around the king's arms are unwrapped it reveals marking similar to her own on her own arms. The king sends a familiar smile her way before bringing using his spare hand to make the release justsu and the way the king moved could only be...

Asuka could only watch in shock as the king regressed in age and changed in body shape to fit her new feminine form. The crimson red skin, the shape of the horns, the wings that appeared from her head...That beautiful long hair that swung wildly in the cold breeze that came in the old castle windows, indicates it could only be one person. Asuka's childhood friend Asura that trained with her until 5 years ago when she was killed during a failed demon possession however she looked much older and her appearance was that of a high succubus the same succubus that supposedly consumed her soul during training. However she was alive and that was all that mattered to Asuka but did that really mean Asura was behind alll the destruction.

Asura knew her friend would be shocked so told her the meaning behind it all and that she faked her death to avoid clan traditions and made a pact with the high succubus and merged with her so they were as one as the high succubus had grown fond of Asura. However with her power alone she couldn't hope to change her fate so used that change to kill the frail old king and masquerade as him by using ninjustsu all so she could save Asuka. The true reason they had made Asura become so friendly with Asuka was to make her trust the other clan and to find her weaknesses so once she had given birth she would have been killed by her new husband and Asura's clan would claim superiority over the other and have them merge. Even if that plan didn't go through her fate would have been to relinquish her talent as a ninja and become a mother and a bride she was doomed to a solitary life of obedience the same would have happened to Asura depite both Asura and Asuka being more talented than their brothers.

When asked why by Asuka as to why she went this far for her, with a quick swift movement Asura removed Asuka's face mask and planted a kiss on her virgin lips and stroked the top of her head like she always used to when congratulating Asuka for her achievements which were never acknowledged by her own family. Asuka being devoted the way of the ninja could only blush and touch the lingering sensation on her lips as duty was always more important than love and she hadn't considered loving anyone especially no one from the same gender. Asura told her to come to her when she has made her decision and that she will free Asuka from her fate no matter what the cost and waved goodbye as she flew away.

There we go a crazy idea I thought of while being bored so if anyone has time drop a comment about any crazy twists they can think of or any plot twists that just didn't make any sense at all and ruined the overall plot.
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Multiverse-Ferzin119's avatar
Dunno what i'ts based on, but i always love your work. ^^